tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-894181121873232597.post2879692126063800765..comments2013-06-28T20:57:45.594-07:00Comments on A New Era: Peace Without GodAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08217584927296441903noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-894181121873232597.post-56237114800689047102013-01-31T13:52:18.235-08:002013-01-31T13:52:18.235-08:00"because God was taken out of schools" a..."because God was taken out of schools" and "which god was taken out of schools" are both fine, except that you need to be consistent with your capitalization of "god."<br /><br />"The responsibility to reduce conflict in the world is our specie's job." Specie's should be species'.<br /><br />"We have one life with which we can use..." Delete the "with."<br /><br />"On the contrary, there is comfort knowing that we left behind something other than a body. We left a legacy, however small." You should probably change "left" to "will leave" or just "leave." This one is more of a judgment call, though.<br /><br />This one's not grammatical, but you should change the part about meeting times since we changed those last night.<br /><br />That's all I saw, I'm pretty sure I didn't miss anything.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06827665237043208376noreply@blogger.com